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Section Ⅴ Reading for Writing
Activity 1Read for details[细节把握]
1．Why has Ireland produced many great writers and poets?
A．The people there are all good at writing.
B．The beautiful countryside gives people inspiration.
C．The modern industry makes people free from labor(劳动)．
D．The education system there is advanced.
答案 B
2．According to the passage，what can you hear on a quiet morning in the mountains?
A．The song of the birds.
B．The roar of the ocean waves.
C．The cries of the seabirds.
D．The traditional music played everywhere.
答案 A
3．Which of the following is the best place to experience the traditional music of Ireland?
A．A local museum.B．A small town.
C．A village pub.D．A small studio.
答案 C
Activity 2Read for structures[文章架构]
Introduction | Make the reader eager to read your writing： Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had 1.a great influence on its 2.people and traditions. |
Body | Details and examples： ·Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all，offering something for 3.each of the senses. ·And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up 4.the music of the coast. ·To have a chance of experiencing this，stop by a village pub and relax with 5.a glass of wine or a local beer. |
Ending | Help the reader remember your writing： And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face，you are more than likely to experience 6.local culture and customs first-hand. |
Activity 3Read for language features[增分靓句]
1．Read the text and find out the paragraph’s introductory sentence and the ending sentence.
Introductory sentence：
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Ending sentence：
And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face，you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
2．Read the text and find out useful sentences for description of a place.
(1)The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
(2)And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
(3)On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Ⅰ.补句子 析结构
1．On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their(they) morning song.(P44)
结构分析：此句是复合句。while引导的是时间状语从句，主句是两个祈使句。
汉语翻译：山里宁静的早晨，感受阳光洒落在你身上，呼吸着鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天的到来。
2．With all this beauty，it is not surprising(surprise) that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music，dancing，and dining.(P44)
结构分析：此句是复合句。it是形式主语，第一个that引导的从句是真正的主语；第二个that引导的是定语从句，修饰先行词traditions。
汉语翻译：这般美景，自然造就了爱尔兰独特的民间传统，如音乐、舞蹈及菜肴等。
3．To have a chance of experiencing(experience) this，stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer.(P44)
结构分析：此句是祈使句。不定式短语To have...this在句中作目的状语。
汉语翻译：要想体验这一切，可以去一家乡村酒吧，喝一杯葡萄酒或本地的啤酒，放松身心。
4．If you’re lucky，you might be able to enjoy some traditional(tradition) music and dancing，too.(P44)
结构分析：此句是复合句。if引导的是条件状语从句。
汉语翻译：运气好的话，你还可以欣赏到传统的音乐和舞蹈。
Ⅱ.研典句 学用法
with的复合结构
The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.(P44)
“绿宝石(爱尔兰)岛”风光宁静秀美，郡县草木葱茏，青山连绵起伏，牛羊点缀其中，堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
结构分析：此句是简单句。句中的with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle是with的复合结构。
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————with的复合结构常见形式如下：
with＋名词/代词＋宾语补足语doingto dodone形容词/副词介词短语
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(1)每天有这么多的家务要完成，我感到身心疲惫。
With so much housework to complete every day，I feel exhausted physically and mentally.
(2)(读后续写之情绪描写)他坐在那里，悲伤地哭着，双手捂着脸。
He sat there and wept sadly，with his face buried in his hands/with his hands burying his face.
(3)有共享单车可供使用，我们的学校生活变得越来越便利了。
With shared bikes in hand，our school life has become increasingly convenient.
(4)(读后续写之孤独郁闷心理描写)既绝望又无助，简跪了下去，悔恨的泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来。
Desperate and helpless，Jane knelt down，with tears of regret rolling/streaming down her cheeks.
(5)(2023·浙江1月，读后续写)我双手打开，蜂鸟在空中翩翩起舞，好像在向我表示感谢。
With my hands open，the hummingbird danced in the air as if expressing her thanks to me.
本单元的写作项目是描述一个喜欢的地点，属于介绍类说明文，要求学生比较生动、细致地描写所熟悉地点的景物，并恰当地表达自己的感受。
1．开头：介绍该地的基本信息，如地理位置、人文环境等。
2．主体：具体介绍其特色。
3．结尾：总结陈述以吸引读者前去体验。
1．介绍不宜过多，可以主要介绍其历史、特色以及意义等。
2．这类文章重在客观介绍，通常介绍其地理位置、面积、气候、自然资源和居民等，可以根据题目要求加上自己的评论。
3．组织这类文章时要注意安排好说明顺序，描述要详略得当，重点突出，使文章错落有致。
4．描述地点时需要准确使用表示方位的词或短语。
5．此类文章的时态主要以一般现在时为主。
1．开头部分常用表达
It is located/lies in...with an area of...
它位于……，面积为……
It covers an area of...with a history of...
它的面积为……，有着……的历史。
Located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
……位于……，面积……，是中国最著名的景区之一。
The history of...dates back to...
……的历史可追溯到……
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
它自……起就是最受欢迎的旅游景点。
2．主体部分常用表达
There are many places of interest，such as...
这里有很多旅游胜地，如……
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
你可以欣赏在海内外都享有盛誉的……
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
……正吸引着越来越多游客。
An interesting feature of...is...
……的一个有趣的特点是……
With its pleasant climate，rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
有着宜人的气候，丰富的自然资源和美丽的景观，……是中国主要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...
沿着……游览将使你得以领略……
3．结尾部分常用表达
...is well worth visiting.
……非常值得一游。
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
……是一个必去的地方，其非凡的景观会令你流连忘返。
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